Please answer honestly on my book idea?

I asked this before so if you’ve already answered you really don’t have to answer again.
OK this is my idea for a book
Summary-

Lexi James meets Anthony Mason at her mum’s friends wedding. After dating for about a year they fall deeply in love. But then Lexi looses him in a car crash that they were both in. But when she wakes up in the hospital and asks about Anthony they say she was the only person car and no one has heard of an Anthony Mason and he is not even in thhe school records. Lexi is confused as she clearly remembers him. A week after the accident she starts having dreams about him. It is obvious that he is trying to warn her about something but she can”t understand him. When her brothers best friend tells her he remembers Anthony and has dreams about him they become close friends. Her family and friends are all worried about her as she kepts insisting there was someone called Anthony Mason. In the end she finds out that Anthony was an angel of death but when he met her and fell in love with her he was trying to stop her fate. But Lexi’s brothers friend was also an angel of death and he was getting close to Lexi so he could take her life when it was time. Anthony comes back as a human in the end and saves Lexi from Carter(her brothers best friend) and her fate.

Ok would you read it?? If you read about it would you want to pick it up from a shelf.
Do you have any book title ideas??? I’m trying to think of unique ones.
What could the end incident be? Somrthing that maybe no one expected to come or….i don’t know.
I’ve decided that Carter isn’t going to be the brothers friend. I agree with most people and think that would just be wierd especially for the brother.
Someone has suggested that if Lexi had a sister I could make another book where carter comes back and the sister falls in love with him and in the end succedes in killing lexi’s sister. What do u think??? I’m not exactly sure if people would read it and enjoy it or read it and think its a total mess.
The book is going to be in Lexi’s poiny of view.
Anthony and Carter are drawn to Lexi because her fate is to die soon but Anthony tries to stop it.
And I think I’m going to start the book with the scene where Lexi wakes up in hospital asking about Anthony and then she’s going to have flashbacks of what she remembers of Anthony.
And last thing. Lexi gets minor brain trauma from the accident and people think anthony is just a side effect.
Best answer will go to the person who has the most detail and feedback on all these questions!
thanks to all that answer!
OK guys Some people love it some people hate it i don’t know if i should even bother writing. And to the people who hate it this is my own idea i thought it up myself and i haven’t even watched whatever movie you think i’m ripping off. And to the people who love it there must be something you don’t like or are unsure about. don’t be scared to mention it it won’t stop your chances of getting 10 points for best answer. i just want honest opinions

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4 Responses to “Please answer honestly on my book idea?”

  1. Paul says:

    while it does not sound likemy kind of story, i still like it. the idea is a firm start and you seem to have given it alot of thought. i like where your going to start it. it will draw the reader in better than a wedding begining. the end could be a great twist too. just to have carter reveal who is and as he says it is time for here to die, she begins to accept it, since she will be with Anthony, than he steps out and stops carter. maybe a fight ensues, and carter taunts Anthony for the loss of his place as an angel, then Anthony pulls some trick from up his sleeve and gets rid of Carter, r at least he forces him to back off and save lexi’s life.
    overall it sounds sweet. just avoid all the old cliches and give your charecters some real depth

  2. Vinegar says:

    Hmm okay you asked this already. You got 4 answers. And yet… I don’t see any improvement here.

    If you really are serious about having a better story, maybe you should seek out stories similar to yours. That way, you can see why our eyes are glazing over…

  3. SangsBleus says:

    It sounds like a good idea, but it could use a lot more developing.

  4. legendoftheseeker says:

    OMG I LOVE IT I WOULD SO READ IT!! HAVE YOU READ THE BOOK BY BECCA FITZPATRICK HUSH HUSH? I JUST FINISHED IT ITS NEW I’D SAY YOU WOULD LOVE IT I DO:0)

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