OK this is my idea for a book
Summary-
Lexi James meets Anthony Mason at her mum’s friends wedding. After dating for about a year they fall deeply in love. But then Lexi looses him in a car crash that they were both in. But when she wakes up in the hospital and asks about Anthony they say she was the only person car and no one has heard of an Anthony Mason and he is not even in thhe school records. Lexi is confused as she clearly remembers him. A week after the accident she starts having dreams about him. It is obvious that he is trying to warn her about something but she can”t understand him. When her brothers best friend tells her he remembers Anthony and has dreams about him they become close friends. Her family and friends are all worried about her as she kepts insisting there was someone called Anthony Mason. In the end she finds out that Anthony was an angel of death but when he met her and fell in love with her he was trying to stop her fate. But Lexi’s brothers friend was also an angel of death and he was getting close to Lexi so he could take her life when it was time. Anthony comes back as a human in the end and saves Lexi from Carter(her brothers best friend) and her fate.
Ok would you read it?? If you read about it would you want to pick it up from a shelf.
Do you have any book title ideas??? I’m trying to think of unique ones.
What could the end incident be? Somrthing that maybe no one expected to come or….i don’t know.
I’ve decided that Carter isn’t going to be the brothers friend. I agree with most people and think that would just be wierd especially for the brother.
Someone has suggested that if Lexi had a sister I could make another book where carter comes back and the sister falls in love with him and in the end succedes in killing lexi’s sister. What do u think??? I’m not exactly sure if people would read it and enjoy it or read it and think its a total mess.
The book is going to be in Lexi’s poiny of view.
Anthony and Carter are drawn to Lexi because her fate is to die soon but Anthony tries to stop it.
And I think I’m going to start the book with the scene where Lexi wakes up in hospital asking about Anthony and then she’s going to have flashbacks of what she remembers of Anthony.
And last thing. Lexi gets minor brain trauma from the accident and people think anthony is just a side effect.
Best answer will go to the person who has the most detail and feedback on all these questions!
thanks to all that answer!
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Ha! I actually liked the summary, though I don’t know if I would read it because I’m a picky reader and easily gets bored.
I don’t really get Anthony coming back to life to save her. I think there can be a better ending than that.
I don’t know what Angels of Death are. Are they pure evil who goes around taking life, or are they something like the Grim Reaper that takes your soul when your number’s up? Why would they need to latch on to humans for such a long time? Why couldn’t the Angel of Death get to know them within a few days before taking that person’s life? Also, wasn’t Lexi’s "time" supposed to be the car accident? So, why doesn’t Carter take her life when he gets the chance, why does he have to get to know her first and wait for this second "time?" I can see a lot of possible plot holes, so make sure they’re covered with a reasonable explanation.
I think it might be better to have the reader get to know Anthony and see him as a likable character with some quirks or hints that’ll be explained later when the reader finds out he wasn’t human. I think it might work to string the reader along with the main character in trying to find out why people don’t remember her boyfriend and then the twist is that he’s an Angel of Death and so is his friend. I don’t like flashbacks and I think a novel that depends on a lot of flashbacks could be a turn off. Have everything set within the present. Also, I think the car crash should happen within the first chapter to keep the reader’s attention. Or, at the end of the first chapter she wakes up and that’s when someone tells her she was the only one in the car and that her boyfriend didn’t exist.
Maybe you can go into the Angels of Death and explain why they need to get to know their victim. What is the point of that? Are they taking their soul out of the body when they die (ala Dead Like Me)? What about fate? Is every human’s fate known from the time they’re born, such as the exact day, time, and reason they’ll die? Does anything special (good or bad) happen when a human doesn’t die when they’re supposed to die? What happens to Angels of Death when they don’t follow through or try to save their humans – are there any consequences to their actions?
It’s up to you, the writer, to answer your own questions, because that’s what writers do. I can’t give you the ending of your novel, because you’re the one who’s supposed to surprise the reader with it.
No I wouldn’t read this. It sounds like a direct rip off of a movie that came out not too long ago. Except it was a plane, and her daughter.
Also I think that flashbacks are kind of a cheap effect in writing.
srry, got bored within first sentence
I get it. You would probably have readers, but I wouldn’t be one of them. It’s pretty formulaic, but that does seem to sell to teenybopper girls…and they apparently have money to spend.
I sounds like a typical story. I think there’s a 25% chance I may read this. I think you should change some of the plot and add many twists to make the story much more interesting. Who knows, maybe it’ll get published
Best of Luck.
I read a book like this not that long ago and i got quite bored. I would more like to read it if lexi was trying to find Anthony and find out where he went and what was.instead of him being fate angel or death angel mabey he could be some kind of ghost or some part of her soul or part of her. her dad could be dead and he comes back as a younger man and lexi likes him but hes trying to get a message across…well its ok book and ok idea..Good luck.