Open to suggestions, advice, ext. This is for a creative writing project. Tell me what you think. Oh, and I dont need people telling me that I spelled something wrong.. Thats just gets so annoying! And this is the rough draft beggining.
Thanks
My throat ached as I screamed for water. I was dying for thirst.
"Where is April?" I though to myself.
I sat down on the sandy, deserted land. A beetle crawled on my leg, with no other sign of animals. For miles and miles, there were only a few plants. No water was near, as the sun shown its crisp, gold, hot self shinging right on me.
"All I need in this stupid desert was to experience a stupid day with no water for this dumb powerpint project. What do I get back? My friend being late to pick me up and me prcatically dying," I said to myself.
Suddently, I started to see a red, hot sports car driving towards me. Instintly, I knew Aopril was finally coming. Slowly, the car drew to me. I hopped in the car.
"Why are you so late?" I started to yell to April.
"Gosh, Carlie, calm down. Sorry I was late. I went to Josh’s house and lost track of time."
A bottle of water caught my eye. I soon found myself gobbling the water down.
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